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Click herei am standing here naked in america
and i can see all of the shining stars
that there are to distinguish in dallas
well yes i know thats not very many
but then hey at least i am able to say
i am eager and filled with observation
or maybe its just the moon has set
beneath the hushed erotic cornfields
that grow all over the state of iowa
and here in the silent universe spy
the pierced jewels and pearl necklace
of a shamelessly buttnaked galaxy
perhaps captured on a carolina coast
you take off your clothes beneath the
unblinking eye of the voyeur moon
maybe a sultry breeze stiffens nipples
and when a groan escapes your lips
the moon moans and begins to sweat
or we could be two manhattan poets
and so wonderfully naked and alive
in the greatest city in at least america
and casually feeling ourselves up as
we create and trade our latest poems
over that sexy little telephone we use
but here we have gathered in houston
and deciding now to moon the full moon
we pull down our collective britches
and then we launch our asses skyward
towards roman candle stars exploded
high above our exposed american butts
so this is how it is naked in america
we are learning to love ourselves again
because our precious liberties free us
to pursue the justice of our lusty loins
as i stand beneath a washed out sky
deep in the hard heart of horny texas.
...this poem is quite solid -- the title implies a deeper metaphorical message only if the reader wants to prejudge the words before they are read. The theme of naked freedom and exploration is established and held throughout.
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My perkspective on your poem is posted in the poetry forum on the new poems thread.