Naked Semolina

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Naked Semolina

Lay there upon your bed
of spinach, Florentine
I wait with bated breath your chive exhale

This hour brings us rushed and rouge
upon a lavish table spread with honey
minted lamb and grape and grain

One presence still required before
the feast of pastas can begin

What sauce crave you, my naked Semolina?
splash her with abandon, knave frenetic spoon
complement her splendor with a mixture

Prince Alfredo, here to consume you
nakedness your favor, I accept as pure and fair

But your maiden in attendance
bears a slight resemblance
a parmesan remembrance of a lover
from east al dente, olive princess, Angel Hair

I come to spoil you with my richness
my butter cream shall grace your long and lean
and men will crave our tastes combined
throughout a long and torturous day

Peasants dream through grog and gruel
a pity they shall never taste
your wickedness covered, Alfredo sauced
Semolina waits

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8 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
damn, I am hungry now!

jean, this is really good, some of the phrases are strange, but good in a different way. I love your work, but what is a knave frenetic spoon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
D?licieux !

This is tasty, made my stomach growl and I drooled ? ;)

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
I don't think I'd change a thing in this one

Excellent!

dreamsweetdreamsweetover 19 years ago
especially

this line: "Peasants dream through grog and gruel" I can see leering eyes in that line.

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
I just loved this

~But your maiden in attendance

bears a slight resemblance

a parmesan remembrance of a lover

from east al dente, olive princess, Angel Hair~

The words and rhythm and inter rhyming...

knocked me out.

A great poem

clever and fun and meaty

Thank you

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