- Erotic Poetry
- Need You
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Click hereWaiting
Tick tock goes the digital clock
You’re not here
Thoughts of you consume my days
Dreams of you devour my nights
Wanting
Round and round goes my crippled mind
You’re not there
Wet kisses haunt my tingly lips
Phantom tongue caresses my chest
Needing
Nowhere and nothing goes my life
I’m not in you
Hard cock wasted on electronic porn
Hand on clit, you inside you
Dying
Blackness and soundless nothing left
I can’t find you
Hearts break loneliness engulfs
Life dries up, leaves
- COMMENTS
MickNastyover 15 years agoAuthorWow - is that embarassing or what? I must have proofed it 10 times and each time missed it. It *was* supposed to read "clock". Guess my mind was elsewhere!
Thanks for the feedback!
Safe_Betover 15 years agoYou are making some great progress dude! The line, "Round and round goes my crippled mind" was especially nice. I would offer the suggestion that in the line "Tick tock goes the digital cock" you change it to clock. For me there is enough of a contrast with "tick, tock" coming from a digital clock. I would still feel the anguish, but it just seems to read better to me. Well, come on! Where's #3? :)
