- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Netfuck
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
Online drama
unfolding craziness
mimics real life,
emotion run amuck
has me
crawlin the walls,
don't breathe
mind fuck insense
space contingent,
smoke released
sparks fire,
anger fuels
the craving,
liquid pools of
dirty lies
at your
doorstep.
j.b
- COMMENTS
Microwave0venalmost 18 years agoI think the brokenness of the poem kind of reinforces the title of the poem, just something crazy messing with your mind thru the net. So true, that online seems to affect real life too.
Well written, doin' good, joey!
4degreesalmost 18 years agonet fucked right outta
my headfuck, a dark red
stroke of something
like luck glosses across
a disengaged sense of
what the hell am i doing here?
good one joey.
Tom Collinsalmost 18 years ago...drama, drama...the net refects RL, even though it seems it shouldn't, because it's populated by real people. Some forms of drama are good. *grin*
champagne1982almost 18 years agoyour poetry unfolding over on the 30/30 thread at the poetry feedback forum. I liked this, but I think your images would have been better served in larger portions. Those short, choppy lines tend to break the thought into too many pieces and I find I cannot enjoy the presentation on the metaphorical plate.
With that said, the words taste delightful nonetheless.
Carrie
