New Beginnings

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spring's blossoms
bring new beginnings
magically transforming barren
into bountiful

life overflows
germinating beauty
for all to behold

bright sunny days
moments to savor
tucked away for
a rainy day's memories

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This joy of Spring, it's out there, somewhere, I hope. The day before Easter and it's snowing today. We'll have more snow on the ground than on Christmas.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
It sounded pretty...

and created pretty images but the choice of the word "barren" in my mind was wrong. "Barren" is totally unproductive land (rocky, stony ground etc.) not to be confused with a field that has laid fallow i.e. crops not planted that year. Also its the seeds that germinate not the beauty although the later results are beautiful. The rest I really liked.

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years ago
Oh, what a beautiful morning!

By some of the comments, most of the readers were in a bad mood or woke up on the wrong side of the bed or have not had any in a while.

I'm in a great mood, it is bright and sunny here, and I got laid last night.

I only wished the poem was longer. Good job.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
snails

...seems that he doesn't like too many poems so don't take his comments to heart! (~_~)

MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailabout 17 years ago
No

not corny, trite. And it's triteness is ruined by

"germinating beauty"

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