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Click hereAs Dawn breaks
My mind becomes alert
The dreams are gone
My fears fade away
Like darkness to light
As the new day comes into focus
Uncertainty ebbs like the night mist
The world becomes alive
With hopes of success' untold
Dreams of an end
Becomes reality of beginnings
With each new day
I liked the inveitable condratictions made in this. Every word gave a sense of wonderment and truth.
excellent description
emotional ... no wait ... passionate
very enchanting and ... elisive?
thanks for the read~
ideas..and I like this ending:
~Dreams of an end
Becomes reality of beginnings
With each new day ~
That's a nice little twist there.
Keep reading and writing you'll find your style
: )