- Erotic Poetry
- New Moon Waiting
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Flitting through the sky, my wings spread far
And your touch sets fire to my gravity
Kissing each new revealed morsel as though
I were a delicacy
Beneath the darkened sky our bodies, entwined
Give new meaning to our words from long ago
Though our love faded, our hearts jaded
Experience tells me this will be the time
Explosive feeling courses through my viens
The moon dark, black, non-existant
Shall I whisper your name to the sky?
The stars surely would appease the longing
Set into their lush verdancy
Blooming into a super nova
Above our heads, I rest with them
Within the santified passion of your arms
Surrounding me, comforting, safety
Life
You breathe into me the passion I have longed for
And I release as the new moon crests,
Awaiting the sun's arrival
To signal the new dawn of our arising
Together we shall engulf the sky again
Until then
I wait.
- COMMENTS
jthserraalmost 20 years agoto the darkened skies beneath the new moon. The metaphor of the patient new moon, awaiting the light to reveal its true dimension was a nice nuance. I thought perhaps the wording could be trimmed some in areas, but everything did work.
I loved the use of "verdancy" here:
"The stars surely would appease the longing
Set into their lush verdancy
Blooming into a super nova"
I haven't thought of stars as verdant, but this unique look works very well. Very nicely done.
jim : )
