- Erotic Poetry
- Newness
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My day has been good.
All through it, I’ve smiled.
It started with thoughts of you
and will end the same.
The passion in your voice,
The warmth of your laughter
I’m happy knowing
that soon we’ll be together,
with time to explore each other
mind, body and soul.
Thinking of lying with you
sparks a fire deep within
that’s turning to a blaze.
With every imagined touch
my pulse races faster
As the wetness inside me
swells to overflowing
The electricity of your fingertips
trailing down to my inner secrets
tingling with anticipation
the ache within me
intensifies with every inch
Your erotic caressing continues
as I close my eyes to dream of you,
knowing that my fantasies and more
will soon be reality.
- COMMENTS
Rybkaover 20 years agoI find nothing new or stimulating about this poem. It says the same old things in the same old ways. There is nothing structurally wrong with it. It just "tells" rather than "shows and thus does not grab my attention.
Keep writing.
