- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Night
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the colors of the sunset like
chalk on a sidewalk spread before me
so fragile in the moment before darkness
claims the world
the moon comes from behind it's curtain
and the production that is night
begins again
- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijoualmost 16 years agoyour imagery is graceful and nicely vivid. One tiny proofreading quibble: the word you're wanting is "its" rather than "it's". Minor, obviously. I really enjoy the way you use imagery. nicely written.
KOLKOREalmost 16 years agoI like the intimate and warm imagery: the world at the palm of your hand. Thanks.
