Nimrod's Last Stand

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After arrows aimed to heaven
God sent me to rehabilitate
this Babeling fool.
Up his nose I flew
and buzzed in his brain
buzzed until he begged
begged to the guards
make it stop
make it stop!

Through club cracked skull
I made my escape.
The rest,
something like history.


Survivor Poem:
Form: Poet's Choice
Trigger: 19 Point of view: Mosquito

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TzaraTzaraalmost 15 years ago
This is not as bad as you seem to think.

The mosquito up the nose thing is kind of "eww", but appears to be the legend. The execution of the poem is really pretty good.