- Non-Erotic Poetry
- No Need For a Smoke Tonight
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Both detest the clenched eyes,
that taunt shudder yielding
embarrassed sputtering spray.
A brow not yet sweaty-
but still an obligatory moan,
the abrupt end of the lay.
Those ill-timed ecstatic shivers
the ebbing of rigid form
yielding to stuttering quivers
shortening a ribald and carnal act.
Now two fresh strangers wonder
what to do about the unseemly sap.
Quickly comes the flushing of cheeks.
Shortcomings extremely apparent,
all allusions to manly prowess
dribbling around and errant.
Out comes an apology so swift,
the babbling explanation
leaving both quite miffed.
Now all the selfish accolades-
tinkering with wet nipples
yore of lavish oral escapades
the great, spectacular high-hard one
barroom war stories which,
tomorrow to be sure both will admit,
was followed upon in spirit
with an all-too-brief exuberance.
Now is tis known to each
the flapping tongue was by far more potent
than the rapidly shrinking protuberance.
- COMMENTS
twelveoonealmost 13 years agoOK, to be honest it is tough to start this. The hook, the grabber in the first lines would help. The rest was worth the read. Suggestion, see what you can cut.
