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I talked to a friend yesterday

I was checking her out

she told her me her son's coming home from the war

in Baghdad right now

he told her,

"I don't know why we're here, Mom.

We used to be able to hang with the civilians,

now we can't even let them approach us...

we don't know who the enemy is."

She said he visited for Christmas...

he wept the whole ride home

he said his convoy got hit

when the door of his truck was opened

an arm fell out

the guy was still alive

his friend was shot

he had to plug the wounds

with his fingers

until the medics came

he doesn't know if he lived

my friend's son just turned twenty

he was eighteen when he got there...

He still thinks most of the people are good...

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Epmd607Epmd607almost 17 years ago
the best by you that I've read.

because it's about something real, even with your description of plugging wounds with fingers--we'll chalk that up to poetic license I guess.

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