tagNon-Erotic PoetryNot An Elizabethan Sonnet

Not An Elizabethan Sonnet

bygreenmountaineer©

She drives maybe thirty-five MPH
while tailgating fifteen feet away
is a red faced mime in a state of rage
on the Move, Bitch! Garden State Parkway.

Elizabeth's lost in thought about men
next to the concrete green meridian
painted to look like grass in Patterson

"like when the Lenni Lenape Indian
men had grass on their ass 2 a.m.
and didn't know why when asked by their squaws.
Men! We'd be happier without them!,"

she says to the mirrored Mr. Jaws
whose image is closer than it appears
when Elizabeth downshifts two more gears.










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by Cleardaynow07/17/14

Delightful

Delightful poem. Beautifully depicted. A clash of personalities, of worlds - and soon of fenders. It draws us in and takes us for the ride. It leaves us wondering how the aftermath of the crash will go.

Mymore...

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by twelveoone07/16/14

Perhaps

i'm reading way to much into the play with Elizabeth...
but I doubt it. looks like a triple play
5ed
retires the side
high cleverness without the cloy

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by Oldbear6307/16/14

Great story

Wonderfully told. I like her. Flippen the bird while not moving her hand from the wheel.

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by Ashesh907/15/14

Why is Elizabeth

so angry , GM ? 5-ed for the superb craftsmanship !!

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