when not poetic
a poem is pathetic
and even a sympathetic
reader won't help the authentic
weakness - no trick
will make the poem tick.
when not authentic
the author is pathetic
and even a sympathetic friend
gets sick 'n ill to no end
of the poem that doesn't tickle
wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
1991-10-25
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