Now I Debate

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Are you aware of how you made me feel?
The words my heart said felt so real.
Now I am alone just crying inside,
Because you let the hope of love die.

So now I debate if it can live again.
Now I debate on what my heart says.
Now I debate if love is real.
Now I debate every thing.

You aren't there when I am scared.
You aren't there to even care.
Can you feel the linger of my love?
Why so hard was my heart shoved?

So now I debate if it can live again.
Now I debate on what my heart says.
Now I debate if love is real.
Now I debate every thing.

The pros of love is what my heart seeks.
The cons of love is what the past reaps.
So much bad comes from something good.
Hurt comes from loving and it always could.

So now I debate if it can live again.
Now I debate on what my heart says.
Now I debate if love is real.
Now I debate every thing.

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wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
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i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the poetry forum - wildsweetone