- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Now is the time
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Click hereNow is the time
when you come into my mind, my heart
brushing aside the remnants of the day
Now is the time
when nothing else intrudes, exists
as darkness falls
Now is the time
when our love is still here, still strong
and the years never passed
Now is the time
that I long for, live for
and cherish
- COMMENTS
Queen Of Heartsover 18 years agoI'll be honest. I didn't like the repetition in the poem. I can understand starting out the first line with "Now is the time" but not in every stanza. I REALLY would have like to have read another few lines because it ended so quickly. I wanted a bigger punch.
Now is the time
when you come into my mind, my heart
brushing aside the remnants of the day
Now is the time
when nothing else intrudes, exists
as darkness falls
Now is the time
when our love is still here, still strong
and the years never passed
Now is the time
that I long for, live for
and cherish
Just working on line breaks and flow -
Now is the time when you
come into my mind, my heart
brushing aside the remnants
of the day, when nothing else
intrudes, exists as darkness
falls, when our love is still
here, still strong and the years
never passed (pass? Not sure.)
Now is the time
that I long for, live for
and cherish (there needs to be a bigger punch here, and a few lines added, I believe)
