Numb

by_Lynn_©

I feel nothing
Empty, a blank slate
A failure at life

No one there to help
Punished for being me
I am alone

What did I do wrong?
Choices made were right
Yet I am numb

If I never wake
Give up the fight
I will feel nothing


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Author's note: I'm not a poet. I put words together, and hope others feel the emotion in them. Let me know what you think.

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by Anonymous07/15/17

Your words...

Your sharing here is brave. Not many could offer themselves up like this.

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