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I feel nothing
Empty, a blank slate
A failure at life
No one there to help
Punished for being me
I am alone
What did I do wrong?
Choices made were right
Yet I am numb
If I never wake
Give up the fight
I will feel nothing
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Author's note: I'm not a poet. I put words together, and hope others feel the emotion in them. Let me know what you think.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoYour sharing here is brave. Not many could offer themselves up like this.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWhen you are moved, regardless of the configuration...Great job!!
twosexylatinasabout 14 years agoAwesome poem. And you say you are not a poet. Pfft! I would love to see more of your work posted. This one bites, and I feel the pain--truly a wondrous piece.
YoursSINSerelyover 14 years agoThis is so sad. I want to poke you with a pin and make you come to life. LOL You certainly do get your point across to the reader. Well done.
