- Non-Erotic Poetry
- O Glory!
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Click hereO, glory us
bring forth the demons
and slaves
hell is a circle of fire
demon'd flares, enraged
wake before the sun
bow before the moon
tender fires of hearts
stand before the pain
O, glory
Glory us
ensnare the flight of flee
entraped, entranced
never free
chains that grind,
against broken wrists
drool from putrid lips
Glory, set us free
strain pulses through vains
refrain from speaking;
Silence!
O, Glory!
Save us...
Belowed cries from dungons door
locked away forever more
chalice encrusted in wine
snarls encased in lies
torutured souls reside here;
Wonder why death never comes
here the non-repentant live
caught between life and hell
life has now become the hell
O, Glory!
Set us free...
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 18 years agoLast one of yours I look at today.
You've gone with single spacing on this, unlike your other submissions. Suggest try breaking it into perhaps 3 strophes. And this one could have used that spellchecker - dungeon / tortured caught my eye straight off (and is it vain or vein?).
Other than the mechanics, pretty good and a darker conceptual mood.
My Erotic Trailover 18 years agoshear poetry that will make the hairs on your neck stand on in <grin nice write
