O Horrors!

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A dire warning to the glutton,
As he commits a deadly sin,
For which the body suffers.
Agonies within
And torments,
In the third ring of hell,
With Cerebus, await
The evil doer, with too much
Upon his plate.

This filthy over-indulgence
His afterlife, pollutes,
All those Earthly pleasures,
As odious as rotting fruit.
The sickly smell of souls'
Corruption, will fill his choosy nose
And the shit and offal of his life
Squishes up between his toes.

Beware contemptible glutton,
For as your life is lived,
The fate,
In death,
Awaiting you, returns
All the moderation,
That in life, you give.

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5 Comments
TzaraTzaraover 17 years ago
Wonderful!

A lovely, heartfelt write. 8-)

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
I just knew it!!

Rybka kas a doppleganger... oh shit!!! :)

kinda enjoyed this even though it left a strange taste in my eyes

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Offaly well dung

Are you doing the other sins?

I only am off-put by one word.

minsueminsuealmost 20 years ago
Well done!

The only thing is having all the lines capped caused a bit of confusion for me here:

The sickly smell of souls'

Corruption, will fill his choosy nose

My mind automatically sees Corruption as the beginning of a new sentence since it's capped so it through me off for a moment. I haven't had my coffee yet, though. ;)

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
oh my

And the shit and offal of his life

Squishes up between his toes.

I'll have to read this poem again later and then ponder it for a spell. I'm not leaving any vote right now. I'm still trying to deal with the squish and toes. :)

A real attention grabber.

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