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Tzara
Tzara
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Late last evening, we stood
on the sidewalk in front
of that Italian restaurant—
the one near Dupont Circle,
where the burrata was wonderful
and the bottle of Paolo Bea
made us rather drunk.

What I only can recall
(I drank too much wine,
remember?) is your kiss
as you stepped into the taxi
that ferried you back
into Virginia.

Perhaps it is just me,
but I dreamed I felt some tongue.

Tzara
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twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
in another time

a thread, hopefully, looks like one of my old tricks, hide it in plain view.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Thanx for the clarifications ,Tzara

You really creamed my comments since "creamt" is not in usage either in UK or USA ------ Touche !

TzaraTzaraover 11 years agoAuthor
Hi, Ashesh.

Either "dreamed" or "dreamt" would be correct, as they have the same meaning. "Dreamed" is much more common in American English than "dreamt," whereas in British English, "dreamt" has a much higher frequency of use (though "dreamed" is apparently used more often--see http://grammarist.com/usage/dreamed-dreamt/).

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
You possibly meant " I dreamt "

Not " dreamed " ??!

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
And if so, what did it mean,

Good luck or goodbye?

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