Non-Erotic PoetryOde on a Grecian's Urnthrough his fingers,
her proud Hellenic hooters
now ashes in the wind.
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a Timeless look on the Impermanence of the Human condition !! 5-ed.
Was startled by
Hellenic Hooters - 5'd
"Old on a Grecian urn"
You could leave out 'her smooth', 'his, 'her proud' and 'now' without losing meaning.
'White hair' conveys the sense of time without the need for 'now.' There you are , a 35% trim - feel free to ignore.more...
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