- Erotic Poetry
- Ode to my Lover
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Arouse me
Adore me
Beg me
Bugger me
Butterflies in my tummy
Cuddle me
Caress me
Consume me
Drench me
Delight me
Eat me
Enter me
Elusive happiness
Fancy me
Fuck me
Ghost like caress
Gobble me
Have me
Hold me
Handle me
He answers my unspoken words
Intrique me
Invade me
I am floating
Lick me
Lap me
Love me
Lustful visions dance in my mind
Massage me
Mesmerise me
Make love to me
My thoughts are hot
Nuzzle me
Open me
Ooze inside me
Pamper me
Play with me
Pressurise me
Quietly kiss me
Ravish me
Run your fingers up my fishnets
Soothe me
Suprise me
Seduce me
Strip me
Spank me
Suck me
Try me
Take me
Tempt me
Taste me
Use me
Value me
Weave your passion like thread through my heart
I am lost for words
I am yours
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoEither great minds think alike or lorencino simply plantes a secret chip in my brain...<P>
But I had the exact thoughts regarding this one, namely the longer lines were indeed a breather, both in term of rhythm and in th equality of the personal expression copmpared with the repetitious X -me on the rest of the lines. You could easily twick it a bit to add some variety to the rest aswell. Fun read overall!
lorencinoover 16 years agoInteresting effect of having the occasional longer line insert a personal touch in contrast to the impact of all the lines that end with "me," Something like the lines ending in "me" have a feeling of being an impersonal chant that the longer lines break through to give a touch of the real you.
