Ode to My Sun

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I lay naked in a field of lavender in the morning
Awaiting the sun's arrival
The fragrant smell submerges me in mirth
I long for the sun to kiss me
The sun rises slowly spreading his warmth across the valley
My exposed legs and thighs moist from the pending heat
The sun climbs above me
I am suborinate to his incandescence
He whispers for the wind to come for my relief
Lavender dances against my skin electrifying my nerves
Making my breast excite - standing point
Oh! How I long for sweet release from this nirvana!
My body's senses are amplified by his existance
He calls the winds to blow strong against my skin
I erupt with all the passion and emotions that I contain
The sun is now by my side, dimming his luminence
I am able to look at him with open eyes
while he leaves me for another day.
I call for him to stay but, alas, he just turns away.
I know he can not halt the night.
I watch him as he leaves and dream of our pure delight.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
BrightEyesBlue let me reply for you

Stones and glasshouses don’t go together

Emma-Tate you have broken your tether

Poems to me are one’s sweet thought

They can be read but never bought

Kindness and callous both sound like K

Smile sweet lady and have a nice day

emma_tateemma_tatealmost 14 years ago
typo...oops!!!

that was a "POOR" attempt.....sounds like a bytchjou or UYS pome

emma_tateemma_tatealmost 14 years ago
story-like, not really poetry

and it is a por attempt at that. better luck next time

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