- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Of an Angel
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Click hereOften these days I have wondered
If she herself has noticed
Is aware
That that one solitary strand
Of hair
Rebellious, sensuous, libertine
Sprawled in unabashed embrace upon her cheek
Likens to a tortuous, delicate fracture
Across luminous, life limned porcelain
Makes her beauty vulnerable
So human
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 20 years agoThe simplest looking combination of words are written as a piece of art, the reader sinking into the sensuality of your form.
I wish very much to see new work Odeee, continuity of the mind, heart and soul that is so effectively expressive. Really and truly,though you mark your words as non-erotic, for me they are soul touching and the very definition of sensual.
Would that the hands that type the words into the keyboard type these sensualities into my skin.
NomduPlumeabout 20 years agomy voice to those of the others who have perhaps felt with him as I have.
Maria2394about 20 years agohave run out of **new** things to say about this poet..I enjoy his work tremendously and look forward to more ;)
amansabout 20 years agoI want to comment on all your work, but I really feel I've concluded my appraisal, and I have reduntantly commented in a poem down the list, the same comment as a critic here . . .
Your readers agree Odeee!
Apnaabout 20 years agoHe's not all about anger and frustration . . . this reveals his other, side, the romantic. What a way to go, the imagery as delicate as the best crafted gossamer lace. I look forward to more, more . . .
