- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Of Pedistals and Herecy
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Click hereDid it ever seem so futile?
Everyone cheered and
I, alone on this marble stage,
Failed to see the glory
Inherent in
Existing as some sort of
Deity
Trigger #2: acrostic (double, inverted)
- COMMENTS
UnderYourSpellalmost 15 years agoWell I'm still confused and should it still stand in the challenge?
Tzaraalmost 15 years agoby stating that your poem is a double acrostic. That would be first letters down spelling "deified" and end letters up spelling it as well. It took me a bit to see that you've picked a palindromic word and count down and up on the first letters. Clever and cool.<p>
And I loved your "meta" comment about the spelling errors, so I gave you a five. The poem isn't bad, but your attitude is excellent. And you're funny. :-)
ShadowLoralmost 15 years agoAuthorHowever, it was totally on purpose *cough* >.>
But really, it's symbolic of how it's false, how it's really not heresy and really not a pedestal. It's meta lol. I do that sometimes. <.<
