oh come and pose just for me

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oh come and pose just for me
and i will paint you a poem

it will be dripping with pearls
spilling wet upon your breasts

and your eyes will be skies
and your hair will be the air

oh come and pose for poetry
and i will paint your mouth

your pouted lips are parted
your tongue visible and wet

see the captured complexion
of your enraptured reflection

i will tint your toes in rose and
paint fingers that seem to linger

let me illustrate your silouette
drawn dark upon the gaping sun

and in a field of bluebonnets
i will expose for you sonnets

and if you agree to pose for me
in a pair of fish-netted hosiery

i will make my poems come
naked as the day you were born.

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Lalenya LoveLalenya Loveabout 20 years ago
Beautiful!

I did some posing this past week for two men very dear to me, and reading this poem recaptured the experience for me. Thank you!

Brightest Blessings,

Lalenya :^)

champagne1982champagne1982about 20 years ago
posiery

I'll peel down my hose and suppose that when my nose is full of rose, then

I'll chant the rosary because I must pay penance for you and the run in my hosiery...

(I'm not even catholic!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Lovely alliteration......

...makes this a wonderful read. I like the amalgamation of painting with poetry - always do. Lovely, thank you.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
I loved

the addition of the hosiery.

a woman in your favorite hose can conjure all those images that you spoke of.

Really well done

and some great language

Thank you

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
There are parts of this poem I immensely enjoy.

I like your internal rhyme in the third stanza. The last stanza is fabulous. I believe only a couple of images seem out of place with the rest of the poem: bluebonnets may be a bit too sweet, but not bad. Though, fish-net hosiery seems almost sleazy compared to the rest of your words. Maybe it's just me, but I had trouble leaping out of the field of bluebonnets and into a pair of fish nets. ;)

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