tagNon-Erotic PoetryOkay Play Date

Okay Play Date


Is 10:00 okay with you?

Dear Rachel,

okay is a morning
alone, "i'm ok"
head not quite in an ache
but not quite right
afraid to move or open eyes
too far for fear the pain
may return

"okay" is rain demanded
indoor children
making the most
of play dough and paint
swings blow, without child
in wind

I am not okay

I am something more

babies in bellies
did I mention

there has to be another word,
"okay" does not come close....

does anyone have a thesaurus?

please look up "okay" plus five
multiplied by two

half past happy
and one the way to blissful anticipation
take a left at over-joyed
and park it right there
right next to,
"can't wait to see you
and your beautiful children"

See you at 10,



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