Old Man at a Funeral

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foehn2
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The talk and songs are finally done
and now the ushers indicate
that pews should empty, one by one,
as one old dead man lies in state.

All walk down the aisle, in line.
Slowly, most heads slightly bowed,
they pass the coffin where the fine
light linen substitutes for shroud.

The widow’s eyes are met by some.
Some touch her hand; she sees some tears.
Some soft whispers. Most are dumb,
passing the corpse of ninety years.

They keep their distance, most of these,
as though by staying far away
they magically may somehow ease
themselves away from death, a day.

But one old man with cotton hair,
assisted by a lady, goes
until the line is near, and there,
he pulls her out of line, and close.

Steadies himself at the casket, takes
its edges in his hands, looks down
into his friend’s face, slightly shakes:
and then moves on, without a frown.


 

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foehn2foehn2about 16 years agoAuthor
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The deceased died on the 7th of February, and the funeral was held on the 10th. I found out who the "old man" was, after some investigation; and he died, yesterday.

normal jeannormal jeanabout 16 years ago
i liked it

I do have a problem with stanza 3,it seems awkward somehow But I felt your rhymes were natural. I enjoyed th poem. thanks for sharing

NJ

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 16 years ago
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I held back from commenting not because I didn't like it but it's too close for comfort and describes it too well

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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don't like "frown", seems a little on the cheap side, forced - double whammy-it is the last word.

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
This is a dignified sentiment

and it's moving because it has an elegaic pace. I see Eve's point and I think making it more spare would work, but I think this construction works, too. The slow measured pace seems appropriate to the subject to me. Thank you for the read. :-)

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