- Non-Erotic Poetry
- On A Whim
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He came into my life on a whim and a dime, no money in our pockets and our hearts were doing time.
He told me I was beautiful, as I kissed his smiling face. It may have been the wrong time but our hearts were in the right place.
We tried to say goodbye, with lots of reasons why, and I told him, that I would love
him forever.
There I sat, with my phone in my hand, reminiscing of our nights, making love in the sand.
I know that you love me baby, and you know I love you too- it’s something we both have inside, and my feelings for you, they just won’t hide.
When the love is not a lie, and the passion is so deep inside, I’ll fight my hardest to keep us alive,,,,
cause baby,
It’s you I see,
It’s you I need,
I’m for you, and you’re for me, I want to open up my heart to you, and give you a world that you’ve never seen.
- COMMENTS
Safe_Betover 15 years agoLiked it. You need to concentrate on "showing" rather than telling though. Work on finding the right WORD instead of using a whole sentence. It will make your poetry more compact and effective.
