tagNon-Erotic PoetryOn Inspiration

On Inspiration

bylilithrising©

I cried for days longing for your touch
Dazzled by the queen of palms smooth sway to the winds
What I would give to see you again

Happy to feel you close to me such
Misty ocean spray tickles my skin
It's been too long my love, my love

Nostalgia uncoiling and emerging from my clutch
Lemongrass shoots spring forth up to the brim
What I would give to see you again

A pinch of regret snaps me back into my skin
Fallen leaves piling high as if on a whim
It's been too long my love, my love

Gazing to the sky wanting so much
Stones so smooth balancing so tall and slim
What I would give to see you again

And so I breathe in my face flush
Letting go with an exhalation
What I would give to see you again
It's been too long my love, my love

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by legerdemer04/24/16

Some beautiful lines here

But I am confused by the 'such' in L4. I love the two repeating lines - they intertwine nicely.

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