- Non-Erotic Poetry
- on Joinings
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Click hereTrailed memories,
dragging across
stone cold floors of
My Mind.
assailed senses, besieged hearts,
tugged strings, puppeteer foibles
Reflected shadows in
panes of shattered lake
surfaces
What lies beneath, can
only be good to know.
I was,
He said, softly
Raising eyes meant for the One
chin cup'd
Whispering winds, cackling boughs,
sometimes crackling
and oft, lying in
stupor’d sleepy tangles
of limbs
Where was he,
where was she
who was the third
pair of slewed
sundered limbs,
added to that
agglomerate and
accreted slowly to
that Joining
Writhing masses of
flesh like blood worms
being fed to ravenous
gulping mouths
Trembles and tremors shook
the rippling flesh
Her belly undulated in
deepening shadows
that drank Him in
Later, they were One
as always They were
meant to Be
- COMMENTS
perksalmost 20 years ago"Reflected shadows in
panes of shattered lake
surfaces"
ohhhhh, that's purdy! Even if I might remove "surfaces" with the use of "panes" it's pretty understood, I would think. You like the big words too, Jazzy, but they only kill me once in awhile. Good thing I have that built in dictionary. "agglomerate" and "accreted" one right after the other, made me lose your imagery, because I's not as edumacated. Pretty good poem, I struggled with clarity here and there, but I enjoyed it anyway. Plus, you have some meter that sneaks up on the reader, and I enjoy little suprises like that.
Maria2394almost 20 years agoare waaay too dark for me, but lately, I have seen something I didnt see before. I love your images Razz, and especially the way that you use words to make them sound alive. this is really good, it sounded right, worked perfectly for me, thank you :)
Anonymousalmost 20 years agovivid imagery, RazzRajen. Especailly the last two stanzas. Good work, much enjoyed.
