- Erotic Poetry
- On the Banks of the Canal
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Walking along the canal banks,
listening to the birds as the sun sets.
It's rays make our skin glow
like a saint's halo.
Watching the water drift lazily along.
Seeing it calm and still.
Touch you, caress you, move in for the sweet
seductive kill.
Your lingering smell and your distinctive taste.
I love your...
Stay with me, long after the sun has set on the banks of the canal.
Here we can bask in each other's naked glory.
Here you can help me write our own erotic story.
For our senses only.
- COMMENTS
pelegrinoalmost 10 years agoVery beautiful depictions of love making in both your submissions.
I think I liked better the "Eating Snow", but this one is perhaps more intimate and sweet.
Both 5ed, looking forward to read more.
