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todski28
todski28
18 Followers

I hop on top of you
Set an even pace
Striving for a result

Sweating freely I pound away
Harder, faster, stronger
Trying desperately to hold on

Everything a blur, panting now
For an hour I give you everything I have
Finally I collapse upon the floor

Exhausted spent,
Gasping, breathless
Sweating like an animal
I stare at you in resentment

You do not blink
You do not say a word
You act as if you don't care

How I hate you Treadmill

todski28
todski28
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LyricalliLyricallialmost 9 years ago
Ok, I admit it

I laughed out loud. Then I read it to someone with the most sensual voice I could muster (while trying not to giggle). That last line got a pretty good laugh. Well done, you.

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
BRINGS ONE BACK TO THE "OLD SMOKY" BALLAD

this time a different out-take, TK U MLJ LV NV

redpassionredpassionover 10 years ago
Mind is a bitch

I felt sorry for you until I saw the last line, Thanks it made me laugh

GlaxistGlaxistalmost 11 years ago
Ahahaha

Didn't see that coming :)