- Erotic Poetry
- On Your Face (A Ghazal)
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Tonight, he'll linger as he'd trace
the cum he spurted on your face
and, as his cock did, see sperm slips
from in between your lips - such grace
can only ensure hisy heart skips
as you lick lips - relish the taste:
it makes you wriggle; your sweet hips
will spread, so your beloved can place
his second cock stand, so it rips
virginity at such a pace
that you will cry, as your cunt grips,
and tears join cum-stains on your face.
- COMMENTS
buttersabout 13 years agowhile i like how you've used the ghazal for this topic, i have a query about tense in those first two lines: why the crossing over of past/present tense? i found it a bit confusing. if it's not deliberate, then it's quite simply fixed.
Tonight, he'll linger as he'd trace
the cum he spurted on your face
to
Tonight, he'll linger as he'll trace
the cum he's spurted on your face
also, one tiny typo = 'hisy' instead of 'his'
is there any other word you could substitute for 'spurted'? maybe using the ghazal for this is stepping outside the bounds enough for the cliché not to matter, but it's just one of those words i see time and time and time again until it starts to grate way beyond its sole use here. :)
