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laelia
laelia
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his one kiss
is the world
tilted, open lips
spinning a sweet
tender lure to
the slow burn
of scraping beard
and clashing teeth
struggling to savor
love's hungry feast
woven limbs singing
a song of yes, echoes
heard in a sleepless
night of knowing

laelia
laelia
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annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
all the color

You paint with a brush dipped in raw emotion dripping from pallet to floor. I want to step on the spill and leave footprint smudges on hardwood with hopes some soaks in.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Oh yes...

so wonderfully sensuous and erotic. This is Erotica. Well done.

jim : )

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
"echoes heard

in a sleepless night of knowing"

What a great line

I've had many of those and never though to describe it that way

Your work is wonderful

Please continue to write

Thank you

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