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Click hereI know I'm not the one for you
And I know that you know it too
But please give me just this
One more night with your kiss
I don't care if it's wrong or right
All I want is one more night
With you
Wrap me up and hold me tight
All I want is one more night
With you
I know your heart will never be mine
Don't feel bad though; I'll be fine
I know this isn't what you want to do
But I just want one more memory with you
I want one more night in your arms
Loved and safe from all harm
With you
One more kiss from your lips
This is my final wish
Of you
Can you grant me my last request?
Let me get everything off my chest
There is poetry in all I see
This is what loving you has done to me
Let my skin wear the mark of your bite
All I want is one more night
With you
Pretend to love me until morning light
All I want is one more night
With you
When dawn breaks I will go my way
We'll never speak of this day
But let me hold the memories in my heart
And love you till the end as I have from the start
All I want is one more night
With you
This is very nice indeed. The combination of structure, repitition and plain words works very well indeed to convey the poignancy.
It is good to see you flexing your muscles and varying the styles and messages.
That is so poignant, I like your rhymes and near rhymes. Thanks for the read and 5ed
You created an amazing structure by making those 'with you' stand alone. Repetition is indeed your ally on this one.