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Click hereMakin' a livin'
ain't livin' at all;
takin' what's given
is takin' a fall.
In the end
we all just blend
into the crowd;
with voices loud
but unheard
is every word
of the masses
who kiss the asses
of the establishment ~
that's my sentiment
exactly!
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jthserraabout 20 years agoSome interesting dialect
but at the end, those big words... Seemed out of place with the rough dialect above. Would like to have seen something rougher... perhaps if you fractured those words into a phonetic spelling...
jim :)
