- Non-Erotic Poetry
- onodata anisoptera
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onodata
anisoptera
hovers above
gaping, snapping maws
of fat mindless catfish.
Me, the primate
on a wooden bridge
in an artificial meadow.
At the end of the bridge
a vending machine
dispenses a quarter's worth
of fish food.
It's silly, but --
the roiling water
the seething, gluttonous mob
of chomping ictalarus
mouths like black pits
fills me with dread.
Dragonfly,
I've always
got to have
a crush
on someone
and today
you're it.
- COMMENTS
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI wanna be that dragon fly.
I would swoosh right by and stick
my tongue out.
Nahhh-Na-Nahhh-Na--Naah-nahhhhh!
I love the imagery and just a
simple days outing. Very mellow
and laid back. Restfull read.
Like it!!
Anonymousover 18 years agoI want to go to the Zoo with you. A very nice read! Made me smile.
Tattler
J.Doeover 18 years agoThank you for making me pull out my dictionary. I think it would better to add your author's note at the bottom of this work because it is too detracting from/distracting reading the note then your text.
This poem flows nicely in my honest opinion and I enjoyed the vivid imagery you penned here.
