- Non-Erotic Poetry
- open your heart
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can you not see
how much my eyes
need to gaze upon the soft cream flesh
of your divinity
longing to undress your wanting soul.
feminine depth
intellectual curves captivate desire
as I search for truth within
exploring sensual touch
of sweetest essence
transforming disillusioned heart
into believer of love’s white magic.
I seek to please the inner you
with gentle massage
caress that stirs in you an appetite
so my spirit can make love
to the beauty of your naked substance
where void does crave for freedom.
- COMMENTS
jd4georgeover 19 years ago...and some lovely images that got a little bogged down for me. I think there's a powerhouse hiding in here, and if you trim some excess verbage (for example, can you eliminate the word "flesh"?) so the images speak for themselves, you'll have a very strong poem.
By getting rid of the extra words, you get to tease the reader with your images rather than "explaining" them.
Still, I enjoyed the read.
