Orange Crush Dreams

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Du Lac
Du Lac
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Crow feet kissed eyes that sparkle with a sip,
Retreat the gray hair and plump hips,
Restored legs strong and agile,
Breasts perky and firm,
We sip again, retiring in that virginal time.

An age of innocence,
Ere our journey on adulthood’s path,
Burrowed into chaotic purgatory.
Dusted with battered souls and broken hearts,
Material needs, money, power and pain.

An age of wisdom.
Love the elixir to the mire of living,
Safe in a hug, wonder in an anthill, joy a first kiss.
We sip slowly, thawed by loves youth.
Enigma of living, frothy Orange Crush dreams.


dlt © Feb. 10 2005

Du Lac
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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
EXCELLENT~

It don't need jaz its an awesome blues note... <hehehe>

excellent poem Du, I loved it.

Orange crush is a dream cycle only not frozen

that would be a melted dream cycle which would be from HOT sex, there fore it's now an orange crush, some just can't get it that hot so they settle for dream cycles <lmao>

I thought your poem was grand Du~

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepabout 19 years ago
your poem

is mentioned in the new poetry reviews

sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
pretty much life, a dull one

jazz it up a bit and it will rock, right now its more like a dreamsicle and not a really cool soda

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