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Click herethunder canyon echoes,
reaching ears
delighting in the storm.
senses stir,
arousing other senses.
lips quiver,
waiting your arrival,
begging for the nectar
that quenches desert
thirst.
eyes absorbing,
enchanting morning petals
still glistening with sprinkles
of thunder's windless rest.
another storm
still rising,
howling whispers.
watered flower's scent,
hypnotic fragrance,
bring fevered lustful
shivers.
eyes closing
lips touch fresh silk
with reverence,
ahhh, the cleansing,
as rains of thunder canyon,
wash again the numb,
awakening titillating
yearnings.
hope to read more in the future....has the tone I enjoy reading....much thanks...blue
take some of it out and keep the best. This is just one example:
thunder canyon echoes,
enchanting morning petals
still glistening with sprinkles
of thunder's windless rest.
another storm
still rising,
howling whispers.
watered flower's scent,
hypnotic fragrance,
eyes closing,
lips touch fresh silk
with reverence.
ah, the cleansing,
as rains of thunder canyon,
wash again the numb,
awakening titillating
yearnings.
i'll be resubmitting this poem tomorrow, i know it needs some work!
i thought i had deleted the thing before i went to bed last night so it wouldn't get submitted, thats what i get for thinking i guess!
~rolls eyes~