Original Sin

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demure101
demure101
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Expelled from Eden, we have found a world
where good and evil will compete, the fruit
of Eve's trespass: too human to withstand
the spell of glossy beauty, the sweet smell
of lush, ripe apples and the haunting lure
of luxury she sank her eager teeth
into the depth of man's true being, strong,
sharp, white and brilliant - and then understood
how she could get her lover to partake
of that same guilty thrill, forbidden, wrong
but all the more alluring. Like a child
he fell for her, just like she knew he would
now that she'd learnt what life was all about –
and neither saw at first the bitter cost
as in the barter innocence got lost
and, man and woman of the world, they made
their way across life's desert where they found
their knowledge, dearly bought, would only serve
to further private ends by clever means,
intelligently brutal, always out
for power, overriding love and doubt.

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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
recommended

in new poems

fwitw

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredalmost 10 years ago
Would you Adam and Eve it?

You and I both post a poem on a similar topic, on the same day but they could not be possibly be any further apart in style

A fabulous 5 :-)

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years ago
just like great Industrial Progress is always Married to

Unimaginable Environmental Sin !!!??? High-5 ed , Dem !!

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
what he said

kinda, sorta and fived

I can hardly wait to get to part where Jesus meets Leper Khan in the desert, forgive me Demure I'm just baiting the other guy - you can delete, but I fived.

Almost makes me want to take a whack at KJV, again - poetry is so inspirational

I did mention I fived this

OK just checking

CleardaynowCleardaynowalmost 10 years ago
Beautiful and perceptive

Beautifully written - as always.

Further it is, I think, the most intelligent, subtle and perceptive analysis I have seen of what 'original sin' as given in the bible actually means.

Nice also to see a significan variation in the theme for your poignancy.

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