Our Deepest Passion

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fawnie
fawnie
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These nights I lay in bed awake
thinking thoughts of you before dreamy slumber.
Closing my eyes I see you there with me
eyes intent on seeing into my soul.
breath upon breath..
and the moans of delightful pleasure.
~~~~~
I feel you inside me,
thrusting deeper and deeper,
reaching for some secret place you have yet to discover.
My body's moving in sync with the music of your sweet desire,
faster and faster you reach into me,
my body surrenders and I lose all control,
as you take me higher and further then I've ever known.
Waves of great pleasure
passing through me like the wind of a winding tornado.
So breathless and gasping at such a beautiful moment.
You holding me tightly, feeling my pleasure
~~~~~
when soul into soul
mind linked with mind
flesh against flesh our oneness complete
the world disappears
there's only you and there's me
we are one in that moment
a smile
a kiss
a soft touch
without words we have spoken
finding fulfillment in our deepest passion.

fawnie
fawnie
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fawniefawniealmost 20 years agoAuthor
egg on face!

i have no idea who ydd is, but the comments i made i regret, they were written after a horrible day..and damn..i fricking take it back..i just hated going to an empty page for someone who had so much to share about my little ole poem, for what it's worth, i am sorry..it was merely an opinion, i should have kept quiet!

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
deepest passion

Your last stanza reads the strongest,

and might stand alone as the poem.

It carries the load of the poetic weight.

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