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Click hereAs my hands slip
below her waist
I explore her inner thighs. I see it...
the desire she's
trying so hard to hide.
Though her body betrays her
with the look of lust in her eyes
the slight arch in her back.
Then to my surprise.
She looks back, her lips part
then she spreads her thighs.
She wants it's,
no she needs it
there's no mistake.
Now to tease her and make her think,
he knows I want it,
how much longer will he wait?
Now I've set the stage,
for a passionate play.
Then she says the words,
"my body is yours today."
Slipping her shirt up and off over her head.
She grabs my left hand and leads me to her bed.
She bends at the waist,
I can see what awaits,
she turns and with both hands upon my face. Then in my haste to proceed with my right hand I do indeed.
Play with, the very gift she intends to give to me.
She looks me in my eyes, with my right hand between her thighs and says, "give to me all I want, all I need, and don't stop til I can't breathe!"
I accept her challenge, to satisfy her wanton need and let her have her way with me.
"tonite my love, I'm all yours to be. Everything you need Nothing else matters to me you see"
these our final words as I take her in my arms from behind, pull her close, deeply inhale her scent. Time seems to freeze, but just...for a moment.
Kissing her neck, caressing her breasts.
Preparing her for whats next.
Getting ready to blow her mind. To claim her as mine, for the first and final time.
starts nicely but concludes poorly, needs work, kill last lines, go for smoother language flow, observational comments to 3rd party reader kill intimacy