Our Love

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Our love is like poetry,
With perfect rhythm and rhyme
Our love is like a sweet, soothing song,
That always grows in beauty through time.

Our love is like an ocean,
Stretching far, to the edge of the sky.
Our love is like a mighty river,
That even with obstacles, never runs dry.

Our love is like a star,
That never dims in it's brilliant light
Our love is like a sunset,
A most wondrous sight

The simplest way to say it is...
I love you now, with all of my heart
I hope you know I always will
And that's just the way it'll stay.

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PicassosPleasurePicassosPleasure3 months ago

I would describe this poem as "sweet streams of simile." I am a hopeless romantic, and I write poetry best from the emotion of love, even my erotic poetry. So this poem read like something I might write, though nowhere near as well because my poetic style. Thank you, for this sweet ride down that stream of simile.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
a song

this flowed well enough to be a song~ nice write (~_*)

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Imagery

Beautifull poem well woven with strong imagery

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