Our Moment Of Oneness

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I see you
In this candle light
Your skin glowing
Your aroma spreading
Arousing
Every sense of my body
Adming the softness
Of your tender touches
Your heartfelt kisses
Our tongues dancing
On the melody of our heartbeats
Rising and falling
Increasing the heat of the moment
Our moment of oneness.

Feeling you against my body
I feel complete
Filling the voids
That were left in my soul
Now it was my turn
To return the favor
The love you always wanted
Kissing your petals
Licking away the sweetness
Feeling grateful
To have a part of you
And let you have a part of me
Devouring this moment
Our moment of oneness.

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xblazexblazeover 7 years agoAuthor
Thanks.

Thank you for your honest opinion. I'll try and be a bit more impressive with the endings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
the first stanz (14 lines) is fine

the second stanza stinko

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