tagNon-Erotic Poetryour thin blood

our thin blood


our thin blood
spoon loving fluid
tomato soup with water only
coagulates regardless

communities with mayors
branches of patriotism
small cells of scouting
nerds and buff
graceful words
elegant lumbering giants,
droplet crushing heart throbs

whole Universes
resolving about themselves
considering identity

from such a tiny prick

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