our thin blood

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2rivers
2rivers
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our thin blood
spoon loving fluid
tomato soup with water only
coagulates regardless

communities with mayors
branches of patriotism
small cells of scouting
nerds and buff
graceful words
elegant lumbering giants,
droplet crushing heart throbs

whole Universes
resolving about themselves
considering identity

from such a tiny prick

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jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
And the universe

in a drop of blood. Once again, wonderful phrasing... excellent poem.

jim : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
but....

aren't many things worth repeating?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
silence

you have already said everything

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
tomato soup

with water only...what in intriguing line

well,your poetry is always intriguing to me, just love it!

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