- Erotic Poetry
- Our Time Together
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My eyes slowly open at the sound of your voice.
Your mouth or your body? It is my choice.
My fingers grasp the straps around my stretched arms.
They're snug, not tight; you'd never do me harm.
My heated gaze meets yours as you slowly lick your lips.
My body arches in need as you firmly grasp my hips.
My thoughts are echoed in my glowing eyes.
You know your mouth will bring the most cries.
As you slowly kiss your way towards my mound
My breath catches in my throat, not making a sound.
Your breath reaches my pussy, heat gently rasping.
My restrained fingers curl, wanton and grasping.
Your hot, wet tongue comes out to finally play.
My greedy little pussy has throbbed for you all day.
As your mouth continues to devour its feast
My legs wrap around you, grabbing without cease.
Your tongue laps up my juices like a cat to cream.
The pleasure builds and builds until I finally scream.
You move up my body, licking and kissing here and there.
Your throbbing length almost bursting to share.
Finally, your mouth reaches mine, so sweet.
I taste my own juices as our hot lips meet.
Your aching head throbs against my lower lips.
You slowly enter my pussy while gripping my hips.
My legs lock around your waist as you thrust.
Looking for that fulfillment, it is a must.
Our bodies are melded together as one.
Wanting to find release, but not wanting to be done.
Thrust after thrust, you growl out my name.
Our bodies lock passionately, we cannot be tamed.
Finally we let go as our meshed bodies hum.
Our eyes lock in wonder as we explode and cum.
- COMMENTS
WickedEvealmost 20 years agoYou have chosen couplets, which is a good start. I'm sure you'll try more challenging rhyming patterns, eventually. I started with couplets. When I first arrived here a few years ago, I had more experienced poets beg me to stop rhyming and try free verse. I would not do it! Not until I was ready. A poet knows when she is ready.
You've chosen basic rhymes for this poem, which all seem to work fine. I like your line lengths. I've seen rhyming poems with a 3 or 4 word line followed by a 16 word line. It just doesn't work well in most cases.
I like your last stanza:
Finally we let go as our meshed bodies hum.
Our eyes lock in wonder as we explode and cum.
Keep writing and make sure to read poetry, too. It's a great way to learn and be inspired. :)
