Padre

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Pelicans and Gulls wing the sunny blue sky
soaring upon her mighty winded breaths

The sea spray, her breezy fragrance aloft
over forever changing dunes, timeless wrinkles

Her hair waves in sun sparkling curls
the surf's tongue swells, lapping the beach

some-days, deblume blooms, but today,
nothing more than a quarter's worth of a sand dollar appears

White sand, a sign of her kind and gentle side
Mother Nature kissing Padre Island's shore

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TeeTeeTeeTeeover 16 years ago
Basking

in the sun the taste of salt on your tongue, and the sea breeze caressing your face, can I have a little umbrella too? Thanks for another good read and smiles :)

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 16 years ago
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Very nice, the imagery made me feel like I was there. Thanks for the trip to the beach at Padre Island.

wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 16 years ago
:)

there is deceptive simplicity in the language used in this poem. looking closer, i see some clever wording that has appeal for me. i think in line one, 'sunny' is a redundant word because the word 'blue' gives you already the picture of a sunny day.

i love the imagery and the alliteration enhances the images/sounds. thanks for sharing this one.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 16 years ago
memories

that will be cherished forever

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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