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Click herePain
fear drives the hunger
it feeds the void
not knowing is the worst
Love brings the pain
Secret touches by candlelight
Moans of delight
love of another
betrays our desire
Do you love me
as I love you?
not knowing is the worst
love brings the pain
love split in two
desire without end
can she forgive me?
for I have sinned
You cannot leave him
we will never touch
God forgive me
what hath I wrought?
I can never have you
that I know is true
but did u ever love me
or hold me dear?
Not knowing is the worst
Forsaken love brings the pain
- COMMENTS
Carillonover 19 years agoForgive me, I'm new at leaving comments. First of all, I enjoyed your poem. However, I was surprised that you mixed very formal language ("what hath I wrought?") with very informal language ("but did u ever love me"). Well, think on it, but please keep writing.
LilDarlinover 19 years agoThis was so Great~!! I really understand and see it all.. You gave us a very vivid picture to the pain, and love lost I think.. or love gained but not to be. I loved this.. Left me wondering what happened? Thanks for the wonderful poem..
DanaQtover 19 years agoread!
You really drew me in to feel this person's pain. Not knowing IS indeed the worst pain.
Thanks for sharing, Dana
